Sunday 29 January 2012

six sentence sunday

from TAKEN IDENTITY

Honestly, why is trying to get ready for hot sex so frustrating? And not the Oh- my-god-I-need-you-in-me-now, frustration, but the fingers-won’t-undo-fastenings-fast- enough sort of frustration.
"Take your jumper off. I need to feel you, see you, oh sweet . . . ." Her voice trailed off as she succeeded in lowering the zip, and his strong, erect penis showed over the top of his underwear. Which gave a whole new meaning to the word briefs.

10 comments:

  1. Okay it didn't post willxorrect as soon as I get to pc......worth waiting for though I promise

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  2. Thanks Zee, my mind was a whirl when i wrote it...

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  3. I love hearing the thoughts racing through her head. Great six! :)

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  4. Nicely done. I like the humour. Who knew a hot scene could also be funny!

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  5. you've all been so kind, and positive. I try to mix my hot sex with humor. After all it can be funny at times. Like in the excerpt above!

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