It's Tantalizing Tuesday again...
200 words inspired by a picture of your choice.
This week it's a little unusual.
Both Doris O'Connor and I have used the same picture, with very different results.
So what do you think?
(Facebook Picture, source unknown)
Two Halves of One Whole
"Shh,
there's no need you know. I understand. I understand totally. D'you think we
haven't all felt like that at times? Wanting, needing, that special someone and
not knowing how to show it?"
He savored her touch. The way her fingers
traced the outline of his lips and then slid slowly inside his mouth, to let
him suck them and taste her.
"I have
trouble vocalizing my thoughts as well Finn. I know you're the only one for me,
and I accept I'm not good at showing you."
He sighed as she
continued to trace the contours of his face. Her hands were warm, and her
breath feathered his skin as she leaned closer. Her beautiful breasts stroked
his chest, and the hairs that covered his torso stood up to welcome her.
"Ah Liana,
How I've missed you. I've so much to tell you, so much to share, and at a loss how
to do it." Finn closed his eyes to experience everything without any
outside interference. "It's been so long."
Her soft
laughter surrounded him. "Not long now love."
Mist surrounded
her. Finn stretched his arms out to catch hold of…nothing.
The doorbell
rang. He opened his eyes.
"Finn, let
me in. I'm home."
catch all the #TT flashes on...
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Happy reading,
Love, R x
Ah, the soft grey haze between reality and our dreams, where we spend the twilight of our love's abandon. Lovely....:) xo
ReplyDeleteVery nice :) x
ReplyDeleteVery romantic
ReplyDeleteI sense these words are written from a personal loss too big to endure for any parent or couple, let alone the author. Awfully sad but beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteLove your take on our picture, Raven :-)
ReplyDeleteWow. I am properly teased, and I desperately want the next 200 words!
ReplyDeleteoh well now that as she is home what will they do outside if his imagination...???? can't wait well done great tease... hugs T
ReplyDeleteSo sensual and filled with anticipation. Love it!
ReplyDeleteYes it's very different to Doris' take but still so beautifully done both of them. Thank you
ReplyDeleteI love your take, too! The emotion is beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteSexy, tender and fascinating. I like the wildly different directions you and Doris took.
ReplyDeleteSo tender. Beautifully romantic. Loved it
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