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Where it's 100 words insired by this picture
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It was so much
easier than she thought.
And so much
harder.
To be held and
know it was the last time
To feel his hand on her back, his breath on
her cheek and know…
It was the last
time.
"You could
come with me."
"How?"
Could she? Dare she?
"Do you
want to?"
Oh yes.
"Then dance
and hold on."
The music
increased in tempo their steps matched it. The room revolved, her dress spun.
"Now
Carita. Hold on, it's now."
Her feet left
the floor and they flew…
"From your
word to mine. Welcome. This is now home."
Catch the others here
Happy reading,
Love R x
Another intriguing piece worth reading. Raven, I'm very impressed by it. I wish there was a way to expand this piece.
ReplyDeleteNow I'm really keen to know more. Great flash
ReplyDeleteWhere are they going? You created quite a realm of the unknown. Great process in building up your twist.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Pablo - where are they going? You've got me hooked, now, Raven. Great flash :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat flash, Raven :-) I hope she likes his word.
ReplyDeletewow I love this sweet fantasy. Loving and caring and what a new life she'll have.
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