The Way to Go
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The Way to Go...
It was easy. Almost too easy he thought. One deep breath and
there it was. Sharp, purple, violent…
There he was.
He smiled as his breath increased in density and speed. The lights
flickered and faded and came back faster and deeper than ever before.
Almost there.
Are you ready? He
was, was she?
Cabron shut his eyes and concentrated. Her face filled his
mind her mind met his. Troubled, uncertain, but open to him and his needs.
Sarita.
His future as long as…
As what?
Time to go.
Cabron stood, inhaled and exhaled once more to increase the
light, the noise and the anticipation.
Sarita stirred, rolled over and smiled.
The smile of a houri. The way of his future.
If all went well, he would be…
Do not think about it,
just do it. Do it…One last breath, one violent purple streak of lightning
and he slid to earth.
To where Sarita slept. Slept in anticipation of him, his
presence and oh yes… this…
Cabron bent his head, and moved closer. As if she knew what
he wanted she stirred and bared her neck.
The triumphant roll of thunder and crack of lightning told him it was time.
The triumphant roll of thunder and crack of lightning told him it was time.
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That was thrilling! Exciting, dare I say...electrifying? The stop and start anticipation, hesitation, excitement was a rollercoaster of magnetic proportions. I just loved this. xo
ReplyDeleteThat was thrilling! Exciting, dare I say...electrifying? The stop and start anticipation, hesitation, excitement was a rollercoaster of magnetic proportions. I just loved this. xo
ReplyDeleteDramatic tension, poetic flow, and a lyrical tempo! Very nice tease, Raven.
ReplyDeleteYou know you will have to write this story. :-)
ReplyDeleteFantastic, fast paced tease
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