Friday, 11 October 2013

#FlashFictionFriday... A Hint of...?

Where we all write 100 word flash on the same picture...

This is my offering today

A hint of...?

"Keep your eyes shut. What do you feel?" He ran his tongue over her lips, and waited.
She sighed. "Your breath on my skin."
He kissed her nose.
"Tickles."
"Good and this?" Water streamed over them.
She giggled. "Wet."
He held her breasts in his hands and she shivered. "So good."
"And now? What do you scent?" He pressed tiny kisses over her face and neck. Then he switched the water off. 
"Scents?" he asked again. "No peeking
She sniffed and smiled. "Oh wow. Really? Is it?"
He laughed.
Yep Beef Madras, just as my lady asked."

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Posted by Raven McAllan at 02:08

10 comments:

  1. Unknown11 October 2013 at 09:43

    Awh they seem sweet :)

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  2. Anonymous11 October 2013 at 20:35

    LOL, I love that last line!

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  3. Unknown11 October 2013 at 22:52

    love it. a hint of how well he knows her. I hope its her favorite meal he surprised her with

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  4. Naomi Shaw12 October 2013 at 15:12

    Full marks for giving the lady what she desires, but did he cook it himself?

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  5. Rolling Muse in The Roses13 October 2013 at 09:20

    This was fun and playful. I love a man that cooks. :) Great flash!

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  6. Anonymous13 October 2013 at 12:04

    The last line was funny! Nice Flash.

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  7. Julian Spong13 October 2013 at 12:18

    Great flash with a wicked last line. I loved it

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  8. Muffy Wilson13 October 2013 at 16:20

    Delihtful, Raven! Can't go too far After a stirring shower without sustanence:) xo

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  9. J.P. Stevens14 October 2013 at 20:36

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  10. J.P. Stevens14 October 2013 at 20:37

    Ha ha ha there is NOTHING like a good curry. Loved this Raven. xxx

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