Flasher Fiction Friday
One hot picture... (well it is Jimmy Thomas)
100 words
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(Picture used with kind permission from Jimmy Thomas
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"I thought you said this was private?
That no one would know."
"Yeah well I though it would be. And
hey you didn't argue."
She shivered. "I know, but it was dark,
I just followed you. Like I always do."
"Yeah…Love you, babe."
"So what now? I thought we were coming
to your new house. To have a shower to warm up after the snowball fight."
"Yeah, so did I."
"But?"
He sighed. "But it was dark. But I
didn't count the floors properly."
"And?"
"And I went to the wrong floor. This
is the bathroom showroom. The staff arrive any minute."
Happy Reading,
Love R x
Raven, I liked the creative twist to the story. Great work!
ReplyDeleteLOL. Guess they'd better get on with it. Fun read. Sounds like he should have a sheepish look ;-)
ReplyDeleteNice twist - I wonder if the staff are coming quickly?
ReplyDeleteLOL! Fun flash, Raven :-D
ReplyDeleteWell done and fun. It has just enough edge to make one nervous they might get caught. They don't look nervous...LOL xo
ReplyDeleteBahaha. Ooops. Very funny.
ReplyDeleteHaha! The staff are going to get a big surprise! A real fun flash, excellently written Raven x
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