Tuesday, 9 April 2013

The Birthday Treat...


Happy Birthday Tantalizing Tuesdays




The Birthday Treat...








"I can't," She looked at the plate of cakes and sighed. Being Coeliac was the pits at a party. Especially your own. How they could have lost her pastry goodness only knows. All she'd asked for was one measily Danish she could eat, and it'd gone. She sighed, shut her eyes for a second and stretched...

"Eat me, I'm all yours. I'm good for you." Mela jumped, put her hand out to steady herself and felt... a body? Eh? What the....

She opened her eyes and stared at the hot-bod looming over her. Blond hair, blue eyes and a smile so sinful, she'd even eat gluten to have it. How was she flat on her back, on a bed with a naked please-take-me-I'm-yours guy looking at her as if he'd like to eat her, not any blooming cake. The last thing she remembered was some bugger losing her birthday treat.

"I'm your birthday treat. I'm your Danish. Eat me." His mouth lowered onto hers and she tasted chocolate and...

"Mela, come on, get with it. We've found your cake, time to celebrate."

She looked around. No hot naked guy... There was a pastry though...with a bite out of it.

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Now because it's our birthday, We're giving you the present... Yeah, we're funny like that...

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http://tantalizingtuesday.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/9-april-happy-birthday-teasers.html?zx=d43118ce49b7d2f8

12 comments:

  1. Loved that! The Danish sounds yummy!

    Pic is good too!

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  2. Oh! Ohhh! I want one! Where do I get one!?

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  3. I want a Danish exactly the same as that one!! Now! Great teaser

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  4. Enjoyed it. Now I am hungry!

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  5. That sounds like one of my fantasies! Loved it!

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  6. Yummy! I'd like a Danish too. ;)

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  7. I have several glutin-intolerant/coeliac family members. It is an utter pain. One can hardly blame her for dreaming of something better.

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  8. I feel so bad for her not able to eat the pastries, but worse, her fantasy wasn't what really happened. Your flash was very appealing, sensitive, and most of all very sexy.

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  9. congratulations to Naomi who is my winner XXX please let me know what book and in what format you'd like :)

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  10. Beautifully judged, Raven. Playful and fun with a hint of sadness at the end. Happy TT Birthday.

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