Happy Birthday Tantalizing Tuesdays
The Birthday Treat...
"I can't," She looked at the plate of
cakes and sighed. Being Coeliac was the pits at a party. Especially your own.
How they could have lost her pastry goodness only knows. All she'd asked for
was one measily Danish she could eat, and it'd gone. She sighed, shut her eyes
for a second and stretched...
"Eat me, I'm all yours. I'm good for
you." Mela jumped, put her hand out to steady herself and felt... a
body? Eh? What the....
She opened her eyes and stared at the hot-bod
looming over her. Blond hair, blue eyes and a smile so sinful, she'd even eat
gluten to have it. How was she flat on her back, on a bed with a naked
please-take-me-I'm-yours guy looking at her as if he'd like to eat her, not any
blooming cake. The last thing she remembered was some bugger losing her
birthday treat.
"I'm your birthday treat. I'm your Danish. Eat
me." His mouth lowered onto hers and she tasted chocolate and...
"Mela, come on, get with it. We've found your
cake, time to celebrate."
She looked around. No hot naked guy... There was a pastry though...with
a bite out of it.
*****
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Loved that! The Danish sounds yummy!
ReplyDeletePic is good too!
My kind of Danish, Raven ;-)
ReplyDeleteGreat tease really well written
ReplyDeleteOh! Ohhh! I want one! Where do I get one!?
ReplyDeleteI want a Danish exactly the same as that one!! Now! Great teaser
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it. Now I am hungry!
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like one of my fantasies! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteYummy! I'd like a Danish too. ;)
ReplyDeleteI have several glutin-intolerant/coeliac family members. It is an utter pain. One can hardly blame her for dreaming of something better.
ReplyDeleteI feel so bad for her not able to eat the pastries, but worse, her fantasy wasn't what really happened. Your flash was very appealing, sensitive, and most of all very sexy.
ReplyDeletecongratulations to Naomi who is my winner XXX please let me know what book and in what format you'd like :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully judged, Raven. Playful and fun with a hint of sadness at the end. Happy TT Birthday.
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