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Hi, I'm Randi Alexander and I write
cowboy erotic romance. I'm published with The Wild Rose Press' Cowboy Kink
line. My new release, Her Cowboy Stud, is available now.
Thank you for hosting me, Raven. You
have a beautiful blog. I spent a lot of time reading through all the fascinating
posts and sexy excerpts. As I read, I realized how compelling words can be,
whether whispered or shouted or just formed as a thought inside a character's
head.
In romance novels, especially erotic
romance novels, authors love to intrigue readers with sexual tension. Starting
from page one, we start the hero and heroine thinking about s-e-x.
Here are some examples from Her
Cowboy Stud:
Macy sucked in a breath as she
pushed herself back to standing. That voice. Deep and strong, slow with a
sensual Texas drawl, sending jolts of heat to her core and evoking the daydream
she’d been indulging in for three quarters of a year. The fantasy where cowboy
Trace McGonagall held her close and murmured low, sexy promises in her ear.
Trace bet she was thinking the same
thing. If she got down here to Texas occasionally, they could make it a regular
thing. … One sizzling night a month he could spend some of his bankroll on her.
They’d meet in a high-class Houston hotel. He’d pull her to him, hard and fast,
and their kisses would be frantic as they ripped the clothes off each other.
He’d tell her with desperation choking his voice, “I want you. Now.” He’d pick
her up and press her back against the wall. He’d lift her legs and slide into
her hot, wet pussy.
With this technique, we're deep
inside each character's head, and we know what they want, even if the object of
their lust doesn't. (Did you notice how the thoughts differ from a woman's head
to a man's?)
Another way to turn up the heat
under the boiling pot of desire (wow, what an analogy!) is to have the
characters tell each other what they would like to do.
“Darlin’.” He lifted Macy gently in his arms and carried her to the bed,
laying her on the comforter. “I want to taste you. Everywhere.” His words came
slow and full of promise. His half-lidded eyes turned nearly black with lust as
he looked his fill of her body, not touching her, taunting her with
expectation.
“I know what you need, Trace,” her voice rasped. “It’s the same with me.
I want you hard and fast this time.” The naughty glint in her blue eyes charged
like electricity through him, shooting wild, throbbing pulses down into his
cock.
“I want to take you from behind.” He’d been craving this from the moment
he saw her looking out over his land, her white pants snug on her perfect ass,
her sexy calves bare, and her feet, delicate in those high heeled sandals. “I
want your sweet ass pressed up against my hips, and I want to feel my balls
slappin’ against your shaved mound.”
Her eyes closed as she cried, “Yes, please. I want you inside me. Fuck
me from behind.”
When the characters tell each other
what they want, what they need to do to each other, it gets extremely sexy. The
desire buzzes between them like electricity and we get a double dose of
tension: we can feel how the dialogue affects the person saying the words, as
well as how the words impact the character who's hearing them.
The third way to build the sexual
steam in a story is, of course, when the hot, sticky, naughty lovemaking
begins. (woo-hoo!) My example of that is below in the excerpt.
Being a writer, I'm always on the
lookout for the phrases in a book that make me go, "Ohhhh yaaaa!"
What are some of the things that you’ve read or have had whispered to you that
have set your blood racing and raised tingles across your skin? Is there one
thing that every time you hear it send your world spinning? Please share it in
a comment, and one lucky commenter will win an ecopy of my anthology.
Trace McGonagall’s quiet life on his
Houston stud ranch is shaken up when gorgeous Macy Veralta arrives to claim an
inheritance left to her in his uncle’s will. Trace sees her as just another
gold digger, but he also can’t resist her curvy body. When she hints at being
the perfect submissive to his Dom, he has to have her.
Macy wouldn’t have been three months
late to claim her inheritance if she’d known Trace was sin in jeans. The
cowboy’s dominant bearing and the smoldering glint in his eyes send shivers to
her toes and stirs images of being bound in his bed and disciplined at his
hand. But could Trace’s perfect seduction be part of his plan to reclaim her
inheritance?
EXCERPT: Over
18 only, please.
Something touched Macy's inner thigh. Cool, like
leather. The riding crop? Yes, she wanted to feel the sting. She made a tiny
whimper, and whispered, “Please?”
With a groan, Trace drew back and brought the whip
down on her right cheek, then her left, then softer on each of her thighs, but
still with a sting.
The burn lasted just seconds but gave her a new
sensation, one she’d never known. Throbbing pulses of carnal need converged in
her core, and her pussy lips swelled and tingled.
“No,” he groaned. “You’re not submissive enough to
deserve the crop.” The sound of the flogger hitting flesh made her hold her
breath, but he walked to the side of the bed, slapping the rubber against his
palm. “Do you even deserve more flogging?”
From where she lay on the bed, with her head turned
toward the window, she couldn’t see him. Not daring to turn her head without
permission, she said, “My pussy. Please.”
He touched the strips of the whip to her most
sensitive flesh. “Has it been a bad pussy?”
She bit her lip, loving the way he stayed in
character, but let her determine the severity of her discipline.
“Very bad.”
In a second, the stinging strips of rubber lashed
her inner thighs and swollen lips. Her slit contracted, feral waves of decadent
sensation gripped her deep inside her belly. A soft groan escaped her throat
before she could stop it. The second strike came faster, tingling through her
as her body slid closer to orgasm. Her hips bucked, driving her to the edge of
bliss.
“You will not come without my permission,” he commanded.
“Up on your hands.”
Shaking, her head spinning with the needed release,
she pushed her upper body from the bed. Her breasts jiggled, sending the clamps
swaying, tugging at her in waves of dark pleasure.
He stood next to her. She could see his jeans and
the immense erection captured behind the denim.
“I hold the power of your orgasms.”
“Yes,” she agreed, wanting to urge him faster, but
knowing the rules. Obeying them.
Trace walked to the other side of the bed and
crawled to her side. On his knees, he laced a hand in her hair and turned her
head. His kiss was all powerful. He took from her, teaching her, holding her
captive with his mouth. His tongue flicked and tasted, twined and tangled.
Abruptly, he ended the kiss and turned her head the opposite way.
“Look at yourself.”
A large mirror on his low dresser sat at the perfect
angle for her to see both of them. Her body, restrained and clamped, shivered
with satisfaction at the perfect vision. Her on her hands and knees with her
sexy cowboy beside her, and his hand in her hair.
He slid his other hand up her thigh and she caught
his reflection. Dark eyes, nostrils flared, he reminded her of a wild stallion.
His hand cupped her pussy and a jolt went through
her. Her hips bucked, begging for more.
*********
To celebrate the release of Her Cowboy Stud, I'm
giving away, to one lucky *commenter, an e-copy of my new erotic romance short
story anthology Cowboy Bad Boys. Just leave a comment today and we'll
choose a winner tomorrow. *Commenter must be 18 years of age or older to win.
I'm also giving away a custom-made messenger bag and
a $50 gift certificate to Pureromance to one subscriber to my newsletter. For
more details, and to sign up for this contest, please go to my website, RandiAlexander.com And while you're there, you can
read the first chapter of Her Cowboy Stud.
Good luck, and thank you!
Randi "Rode
Hard and Put Up Satisfied"
Her
Cowboy Stud available at The Wild Rose Press
Wilder Roses
Kindle version is available at Amazon.com
*fans self*
ReplyDeleteThat was a nice way to wake up over my coffee! This has just made it on my reading list, Randi, love it!
One thing that always gets me is a man growling right in your ear. Yum!
Of course I may like that a bit too much, as my editor frequently says - your hero growls too much.
Whoops ;-)
I'm laughing, Doris, because my editor catches me using the same phrase a lot, too. And I think I'd like to have my ear growled into. That would be hot. Thanks for the tip!
DeletePass the fan Doris...
ReplyDeleteI love when a writer describes a man's cock massaging a woman's clit when making love and teasing her with it. *blush*
Oooh, Yazmin, yes, that's very hot. I agree. It's so intimate. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteI think I will be taking a cold shower to get ready for work this morning. *Whew* (Or maybe I will just go wake up hubby ;)
ReplyDeleteI am with Doris..I love growl. There is no such thing as too much growl Doris!! I also love when the hero bites, not hard, but just enough to leave a mark. Another good thing is the slow descent down the heroine's body to get to the goodies. Yum! Hell, I like it all!!
Mel
Go wake up the hubby, Mel! Yee-haw! I agree that men leaving their mark is sexy and possessive and loving, too.
DeleteI like when the author uses all five senses to describe the scene; sight, smell, sound, touch, and tongue!
ReplyDeleteTONGUE! LOL, oh my gosh, Jackie, I'm just roaring, here. You're so clever. Yes, it's nice to have all the senses involved in a scene in subtle little ways. Especially that tongue... hee hee
DeleteI need a hose, seriously! Great excerpts Randi and I bought the anthology last night. :)
ReplyDeleteMarika
maw1725@gmail.com
Marika, hi! I saw you joined my mailing list, too. Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the anthology. Let me know what you think of it.
DeleteI will Randi. :) And yes, I signed up.
ReplyDeleteMarika
Congratulations Doris O'Connor! Using Randomizer.org, you were chosen the winner of an ecopy of Cowboy Bad Boys. Please contact me at Randi at RandiAlexander dot com to claim your prize, and please let me know what format you'd like.
ReplyDeleteThanks to Raven for giving up her blog to me for a day. I enjoyed chatting with everyone, and I appreciate the wonderful comments.
Have a great weekend,
Randi
Wooot!
DeleteThanks Randi :-D