Sunday, 29 January 2012

six sentence sunday

from TAKEN IDENTITY

Honestly, why is trying to get ready for hot sex so frustrating? And not the Oh- my-god-I-need-you-in-me-now, frustration, but the fingers-won’t-undo-fastenings-fast- enough sort of frustration.
"Take your jumper off. I need to feel you, see you, oh sweet . . . ." Her voice trailed off as she succeeded in lowering the zip, and his strong, erect penis showed over the top of his underwear. Which gave a whole new meaning to the word briefs.
Posted by Raven McAllan at 08:00

10 comments:

  1. Raven McAllan29 January 2012 at 10:54

    Okay it didn't post willxorrect as soon as I get to pc......worth waiting for though I promise

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  2. Raven McAllan29 January 2012 at 12:54

    all fixed thanks to Cherie

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  3. Zee Monodee29 January 2012 at 16:24

    Lol on that last line! :)

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  4. Raven McAllan29 January 2012 at 16:39

    Thanks Zee, my mind was a whirl when i wrote it...

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  5. Liz29 January 2012 at 16:46

    nice work Raven

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  6. diannehartsock30 January 2012 at 00:06

    I love hearing the thoughts racing through her head. Great six! :)

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  7. Raven McAllan30 January 2012 at 05:04

    Thank you all

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  8. Unknown30 January 2012 at 05:30

    Sexy six!

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  9. Empi30 January 2012 at 08:32

    Nicely done. I like the humour. Who knew a hot scene could also be funny!

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  10. Raven McAllan30 January 2012 at 08:39

    you've all been so kind, and positive. I try to mix my hot sex with humor. After all it can be funny at times. Like in the excerpt above!

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