tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post532919306999759398..comments2024-03-17T17:46:48.823+00:00Comments on Raven's Ramblings: #TantalizingTuesday The EyesRaven McAllanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10915314417510492991noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-77312909484310521322014-01-26T12:58:42.779+00:002014-01-26T12:58:42.779+00:00Great tease that definitely has me wanting to read...Great tease that definitely has me wanting to read a lot moreJulian Sponghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-40746969090893002082014-01-23T16:49:14.571+00:002014-01-23T16:49:14.571+00:00And now you have me on tenterhooks. I just have to...And now you have me on tenterhooks. I just have to know the next bit. Great teaserNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-24678497944485203772014-01-22T20:44:22.285+00:002014-01-22T20:44:22.285+00:00Some beautiful description here along with a fasci...Some beautiful description here along with a fascinating dynamic between the two characters. Truly teasing - all sorts of possibilities with these two...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-14933939104462120032014-01-22T10:17:26.249+00:002014-01-22T10:17:26.249+00:00I wonder what's going on here. Nice.
Also cam...I wonder what's going on here. Nice.<br /><br />Also came for your mid week tease, sweetie.<br />Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-84469071611066146152014-01-22T01:36:04.884+00:002014-01-22T01:36:04.884+00:00Intriguing. Great writing, and I'm curious abo...Intriguing. Great writing, and I'm curious about both characters!Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-59750415889178302892014-01-21T19:29:41.309+00:002014-01-21T19:29:41.309+00:00I want to know more! Fab teaseI want to know more! Fab teaseKarin Bainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11478209249101607134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-20410517437567971292014-01-21T16:53:39.030+00:002014-01-21T16:53:39.030+00:00Wow! I was lost, but I loved it. Great tease...I...Wow! I was lost, but I loved it. Great tease...I want more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-9180596217020472752014-01-21T16:29:41.068+00:002014-01-21T16:29:41.068+00:00Damn! What a disappointment. You built tension and...Damn! What a disappointment. You built tension and expectations and then.. I love how you started with these lines- "The soft voice echoed around the room. It danced on the motes of dust that glittered in the soft sunlight, and caught the breeze that tossed the words into the air."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-40009205233109061482014-01-21T15:21:46.468+00:002014-01-21T15:21:46.468+00:00This is exactly the kind of tease I love to read. ...This is exactly the kind of tease I love to read. There is so much possibility, so many directions my mind tries to go. Love this one, Raven.Molly Synthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869242353609554195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-51767628643784075982014-01-21T13:03:48.915+00:002014-01-21T13:03:48.915+00:00I am still not sure where this is going, but she h...I am still not sure where this is going, but she has control and he a clear weakness. This is intriguing, to say the least.Muffy Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-82465346371469103662014-01-21T12:09:19.510+00:002014-01-21T12:09:19.510+00:00I wasn't sure at first either, but I really li...I wasn't sure at first either, but I really liked the "fly on the wall" aspect; like we just happened to enter into this man's life unheard. You just made a voyeur of me! Now I want to know where he was going!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7807714151849980216.post-67889814447639261122014-01-21T11:50:42.185+00:002014-01-21T11:50:42.185+00:00I didn't know where this was going and I Iove ...I didn't know where this was going and I Iove the twist!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com